Open Question: What do you think of my version of 'Coming into my own'?

27 July 2010, 2:12 pm

I spend over a month in contemplation at the most beautiful monastery in Big Sur. In contemplation, I realized in order for me to love other humans, I need to love myself first. This poem is not written in vain; an astute reader will recognize my simple philosophy. Coming into My Own “I think; therefore I am,” Said the subtle wise sage. I love myself like a gem holistically, full page. What do I have to lose? Not much; my life path is hues of muses bemuse! Holistically I quiz. What do I have to learn? A great deal more I pine for knowledge I do yearn, mind’s open eyes, divine. Compassionate, kind, fair; qualities I embrace. Heart, mind, soul I well wear humanity with grace. How shall I love you so? By loving myself, know!... Read More »

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